June 18, 2008

"Sources of the Delaware"

I love these first few lines of Dean Young's poem maybe too much:

I love you he said but saying it took twenty years
so it was like listening to mountains grow.
I love you she says fifty times into a balloon
then releases the balloon into a room
whose volume she calculated to fit
the breath it would take to read
the complete works of Charlotte Brontë aloud.

3 comments:

lia said...

this is painfully perfectly beautifully perfect.

lia said...

p.s. i just realized our blog is barely more than a week old and already so wise - seriously, what a treasure. i want to make this into a book i can carry around in my pocket.

A and O said...

love this too much?
Not possible.

And it amazes me that the sound of these words can carry across the droning crash of pacific waves.